Poetry of a Grimm Reaper vol.1

Website · by **demo123** » Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:18 pm

So i finished the first volume of my first poetry book.So i will make it public on these forums.

I will only post one piece of poetry since i dont have time to copy-paste all that stuff.Plus it looks way better in its downloaded version

Wheat
Hoples souls try hard, they listen to the sounds,
The sounds of death,Sounds of a scyte
Slashing its wheat.

PDF file:http://www.mediafire.com/?prc9fl89i2w3ll4

Microsoft office word 2007 file:http://www.mediafire.com/?ynrbn7tbrv56al0

Edit:Â©(Copyright symbol)2012-3000 Every thing belongs to Demo.

Website · by **demo123** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:46 pm

So does anyone like it.

by **kmaj** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:17 pm

*hopeless

by **Venator** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:28 pm

not bad but would be better if everything rhymes k?

Website · by **demo123** » Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:51 pm

umadbro wrote:not bad but would be better if everything rhymes k?

Yeah.But im not good with making rhymes in English language.

by **Venator** » Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:25 pm

me neither :D

by **greace** » Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:30 pm

A very good start.
I would like a longer one also.

Website · by **demo123** » Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:49 pm

greace wrote:A very good start.
I would like a longer one also.

You can expect one soon.I just need some motivation.

by **greace** » Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:53 pm

demo123 wrote:
greace wrote:A very good start.
I would like a longer one also.

You can expect one soon.I just need some motivation.

Look at pictures, pictures that are very scary and frightening.

Website · by **demo123** » Thu Mar 29, 2012 4:50 pm

greace wrote:Look at pictures, pictures that are very scary and frightening.

Jeah ill try that.But first ill try listening some classical music whose motiv is death.
First one is Requiem by Mozart.

Shit it didnt work.Plus i dont have patience to listen to serious stuff.

So its time for pictures.

by **Fleischgeruch** » Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:08 pm

demo123 wrote:Jeah ill try that.But first ill try listening some classical music whose motiv is death.
First one is Requiem by Mozart.
Shit it didnt work.Plus i dont have patience to listen to serious stuff.
So its time for pictures.

Laughing so hard right now.
At the (C) 2012-3000, too
heheh... no offence.
OH and spelling could use some work, as usual. Overall, I see you put quite a bit effort in this grim reaper theme. Nice job. I'm always scared as hell when I have to show someone my poetry.

Website · by **demo123** » Sat Mar 31, 2012 7:38 am

If you have enough self confidence you can easly show someone a piece of something even if it is a complete piece of shit.
Not that my poetry is a piece of shit.Duh.And for the copyright thingy.Well i gotta keep my stuff protected.And thx for the compliment.

by **Kanye** » Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:51 pm

I like the wheat poem. Besides the spelling, it was pretty cool. I have a bunch of small poems like that, but I'm not cool enough to post them online.

umadbro wrote:not bad but would be better if everything rhymes k?

You DO know that not all poetry has to rhyme, right?

by **microfoam202** » Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:35 am

by **CptCrow** » Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:30 pm

microfoam202 wrote:HI

whatever that is, it doesn't look very scary. lol

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