[DECLINED] ooge43's application

[ooge43]

hello my name is irwin ramirez i live in california. i am of 14 years of age and i've been playing
this game for 8 months.im a guy who likes to have fun and just play games.im mostly a social
person that likes to have fun.
skype:ooge43
email/facebook:[email protected]/irwin ramirez
in game name: ooge43
timezone:pacific
i would like to join the clan because i have seen what this clan can do and i want to be a part of
it. i am a great sniper and an smg person. i am very mature so i will respect everyone in the
battlefield and not give SPQR a bad name

Thank you for you time!
ooge43

[Kodiak]

Interested. Drop by the IRC.

[Tin]

Your application is currently pending. Date for your interview has been scheduled for 30th September.

Good luck!

[Scipion]

I will be honest here, in every other good big clan this would be a flat out denial. There's a big lack punctuation and capitalization in your sentences which already leaves a bad first impression on us. In fact, I was already going to post this:

Your application has been declined. If you decide to reapply in 3 weeks, please try to take your time when writing the application. Thank you.

But then I remembered. SPQR isn't about being the best clan out there. SPQR doesn't care about the strong "member foundation" made out of the best and most respected users out there.
So, I decided to give you a second chance and to trust you, mainly because you stated you're mature. I like believeing people, even though you joined today and I don't know you. Even though you might never come online again. So there you have it. Try to rewrite your application, make it ungeneric, tell us more about why we should accept you. Use correct punctuation and capitalize the things that are needed to be. Shortly, impress us.
At the end of the day, everything we'll find out and know about you will be compiled in this small piece of text, black on white. You have three days.

[Tin]

@Scipion *clap clap clap*

[jdrewlowery]

hmm he seems young like me . american good . all you need to prove i think is that your mature and you know how to spell
. :)

[Scipion]

@Tin

[Kodiak]

Haven't seen this guy around at all.

[NOOB101]

LOL Tin and Scip! Why do you always do those to same vids :D
Vouch he seems like jdrew (Doesn't use the Shift key)

[Scipion]

Unfortunately, I have to deny this. You had your chance...

[saxbassman]

Scipion DID write you a lovely essay... You had three days, and a second chance. You wasted it.