Finchdude123's Application (Denied)

[finchdude123]

Hi I am Lachlan and I am 9 years old ( I know my grammer looks to good to be true.) I saw the DELTA sign and said to myself: "Well I am a good enough." So why not join? I saw the way they were making buildings and sniper towers, I am not the typical sniper but if they are far away I manage to do it. They were also making bunkers and other funny stuff such as a tanks, and planes! I am a great spader, because I can make a tunnel to the enemy base in pretty much any map. I love to make stuff and guard, I am often sneaky and make blocks that look like grenades and scare to enemy team away!




In Game Name: Finchy
Future In-Game Name : [DELTA]Finchy
Past clans (if any): None
Most Active Server: GoonHaven.org 3
Commonly Used Weapon: Shotgun, Grenade
Time Zone:Tweed Heads, Australia
Play-style: Defensive
Favorite Quote: Great Kill!
Communication: Through Game, Kongregate, Forums
Did you read the entire recruitment page: Yes
Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums: Yes, but only when the internet is on.
Why you want to join:

I saw the way they were helping each other and making extrodinary things! So I wanted to sign up, mostly for that sweet DELTA sign on my name, and also I wanted to be apart of one of the most greatest (and famous!) clan on AoS. Also I wanted to make new friends and be apart of something! I have always wanted to be apart of a club so why not apply?

[ugotpiez]

For one thing, I don't get how you snipe with a shotgun, lol. And also, your Play-Style isn't how good you are, but rather your pattern of playing, or how you play, like spraying, or sniping, or being a sneaky idiot that I would love to destroy. And also, don't copy/paste your Intro paragraph as your "Why you want to join" if it's the same thing, state it in a different way. You also lack a conclusion paragraph.

[CyanLynx]

Damn you, beat me to it.

[ugotpiez]

Alright, as I just stated above, your 'Why you want to join' is the same as your intro paragraph, you just added a puny sentence to the paragraph, which doesn't help it at all.

[finchdude123]

Damn sorry, you see I am only 9 and in grade 4. But it doesn't i'll just apply for another. I don't really care if I got in or not.

[CyanLynx]

You know, it won't be any easier getting into other clans. Especially since they can check your past applications and see that you don't understand the application guidelines. Or trying to join ever clan under the sun.

Either way, good luck getting into any other clan.

[Rydogger]

Hi I am Lachlan and I am 9 years old ( I know my grammer looks to good to be true.) I saw the DELTA sign and said to myself: "Well I am a good enough." So why not join? I saw the way they were making buildings and sniper towers, I am not the typical sniper but if they are far away I manage to do it. They were also making bunkers and other funny stuff such as a tanks, and planes! I am a great spader, because I can make a tunnel to the enemy base in pretty much any map. I love to make stuff and guard, I am often sneaky and make blocks that look like grenades and scare to enemy team away!




In Game Name: Finchy
Future In-Game Name : [DELTA]Finchy
Past clans (if any): None
Most Active Server: GoonHaven.org 3
Commonly Used Weapon: Shotgun, Grenade
Time Zone:Tweed Heads, Australia
Play-style: Very good
Favorite Quote: Great Kill!
Communication: Through Game, Kongregate, Forums
Did you read the entire recruitment page: Yes
Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums: Yes, but only when the internet is on.
Why you want to join:

I saw the DELTA sign and said to myself: "Well I am a good enough." So why not join? I saw the way they were making buildings and sniper towers, I am not the typical sniper but if they are far away I manage to do it. They were also making bunkers and other funny stuff such as a tanks, and planes! I am a great spader, because I can make a tunnel to the enemy base in pretty much any map. I love to make stuff and guard, I am often sneaky and make blocks that look like grenades and scare to enemy team away!

I had a problem trying to join the clan also. Here Ill help you out:

1. Now Im guessing you're on PC, so the red line under words means its misspelled. Right click it and click the word you actually meant to spell
2. Re-Write your entire "Why you want to join" section. It doesnt have to be anything long. Keep it short simple and to the point.
3. Play Style isnt how good you are, its how you play. Do you play offensively and run for the Intel? Or do you play more defensively and try to keep the enemy out of the base?
4. Try to fancy up your Favorite Quote. Try famous quotes by people you like, or people you look up to. Like a favorite sports player.

Hope this helps! And remember, If you get denied, try again in 12 days.

[CyanLynx]

He's really desperate to join a clan.

Check out the Nexus sub-section.

[Dracolth]

Oh Cyan, you detectiving widdle adawable puddy tat.
You can get the dirt on anybody.....<3

[CyanLynx]

I'm more of a cat. I won't let you touch me, but I'll let you take care of me, feed me, and take me to the vet.

I'm going to sleep too, it's like 3am lol.

Night.

[rd15awesome]

y u guys always go off-topic?

[FaZe]

Denied
1. Your beginning and ending only talk about skill and what you can do in-game.
2. It doesn't help if you say you don't care whether you get in or not o.0

[finchdude123]

I would have better luck in a free rider 2 clan. Just see!


http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1779367

[ugotpiez]

Why would you need a clan in Free Rider 2? You don't make sense.

EDIT I just noticed he edited the OP after he got denied, lol.

[CyanLynx]

Sad larry.