A little song i wrote

[demo123]

Since this morning a riff has stucked in my head and couldn`t go away. So i wrote my song on a paper during a geography class.

I did this song in a Doom Metal feeling. I tried to make it ryhime but i failed.

Hell

The Devil is comming
The fire is rising
We`re going to Hell

The Devil is rising
The feeling inside us
We`re going to Hell

The God is trying
But he is failing
The grief, the lust
The fire inside
We`re going to Hell

The God is comming
To our help
But he can`t stop
The fiend

He walks the sould
Never alone
Filling it
With grief and sin

The vengence is comming
The fire is rising
We`re going to Hell

The vengence is comming
The fire is rising
We`re going to Hell


Im sorry if there are any grammar mistakes.

[UNDERCOVER]

A wee bit too religious for my liking, but that's probably because i'm an Atheist.

It's also kinda repetitive, maybe add more lyrics?

BTW, I was a huge Metallica fan when I was younger, and every time I read your lyrics it reminds me of the song "One", lol.

[demo123]

A wee bit too religious for my liking, but that's probably because i'm an Atheist.

It's also kinda repetitive, maybe add more lyrics?

BTW, I was a huge Metallica fan when I was younger, and every time I read your lyrics it reminds me of the song "One", lol.

Well it probably reminded you of "One" because this song is a Metal song(Doom Metal song to be acurate).
I will also add some lyrics since the motivation is flowing like nuts. Expecialy since i started to listen to Doom Metal.

Yeah i agree 100% that it is a bit too religious.


Here is what Themes Doom Metal uses(for people that dont know):"Lyrics in doom metal play a key role. Often, they are pessimistic and include themes such as: suffering, depression, fear, grief, dread, death and anger. While some bands write lyrics in introspective and personal ways, others convey their themes using symbolism – which may be inspired by literature.

Some doom metal bands use religious themes in their music. Trouble, one of the genre's pioneers, were among the first to incorporate Christian imagery. Others have incorporated occult and pagan imagery. For many bands, the use of religious themes is for aesthetic and symbolic purposes only. Examples include lyrics/imagery about the Last Judgment to invoke dread, or the use of crucifixes and cross-shaped headstones to symbolize death.

Furthermore, some doom metal bands write lyrics about drugs or drug addiction. This is most common among stoner doom bands, who often describe hallucinogenic or psychedelic experiences."

[MUSEFan]

OH NO, NOT “GRIEF“! I CAN‘T READ THE WORD GRIEFER AGAIN, NOOO!

Also, I think you made a good job, I‘d like to hear that riff sometime. Do you play guitar?

[Fett316]

Read lyrics, got this feeling from it: http://vocaroo.com/i/s01EZ44QcN0R

Just turned my Metal Master to a Death Metal tone and got that.

I'm a bass player first, so excuse the sloppiness, 6-strings and a pick aren't my forte.

[demo123]

OH NO, NOT “GRIEF“! I CAN‘T READ THE WORD GRIEFER AGAIN, NOOO!

Also, I think you made a good job, I‘d like to hear that riff sometime. Do you play guitar?

No unfortunatly. But i have two instrumental pieces i composed on my pc.This aint dub-step or anything like that. Though it doesnt sound much like i tought that my song sounds.

Symphony of Destruction was made with Mellosoftron III.
Storm was made with CakeWalk Studio Instruments String Section.

http://www.mediafire.com/?nuq2vrcunnz82h8

Read lyrics, got this feeling from it: http://vocaroo.com/i/s01EZ44QcN0R

Just turned my Metal Master to a Death Metal tone and got that.

I'm a bass player first, so excuse the sloppiness, 6-strings and a pick aren't my forte.

Nice good job.

[MUSEFan]

Read lyrics, got this feeling from it: http://vocaroo.com/i/s01EZ44QcN0R

Nice, what software do you use to record?

Demo123: Symphony of Destruction reminds me so much of Zelda: Majora's Mask. :/