Bandit pack! (Pictures)

[ThomasArcane]

http://www.mediafire.com/?l1ktp15n81864r1

It has :
A player skin ( eyes and bandoiler teamchange. )
A sawn off double barrel revolving shotgun
A odd looking bolt-action rifle
A Machine pistol
A grey smiling grenade
A intel backpack
A Club spade
And ironsights.
( Sorry I forgot the intel and spade picture )

Enjoy!

[RooK]

Eee, ugly. Look's like shit. :|

[WtfDog]

http://www.mediafire.com/?l1ktp15n81864r1

It has :
A player skin ( eyes and bandoiler teamchange. )
A sawn off double barrel revolving shotgun
A odd looking bolt-action rifle
A Machine pistol
A grey smiling grenade
A intel backpack
A Club spade
And ironsights.
( Sorry I forgot the intel and spade picture )

Enjoy!

[Paladin]

Hey, a couple of tips for your skins:
- when you take a screenshot, remember to press 'r' and 't' to turn on the in-game shading, so we know what it'll look like.
- your player model is actually alright, but you could benefit with a few more colours on the skin.
- your weapons are ok for something you made up, but the same with the player skins - more colours (skins based on real guns don't need that many colours, as it's more important for them to be true to the real life weapon)
- it's fairly obvious you've used the default weapons for the shotgun and the rifle. in my opinion, this makes the two weapons less appealing than the machine pistol, as less effort seems to have been put into them.
- general lack of polish; a big giveaway for something that isn't going to be very good is the screenshots. the problem here is the fact you have left in some of the window borders in your pics, it makes it look rushed.

Once you have corrected these things, your skins will look much better :)

I hope this has helped you to become a better skin artist, and I hope your next skin goes well.

[TheOperator]

Criticism is kinda harsh, guys. I have seen way WAAAAAY worse for first attempts.

[Paladin]

Criticism is kinda harsh, guys. I have seen way WAAAAAY worse for first attempts.

Oh yes... I'm so glad I deleted my first attempt at a skin. That thing was hideous.

[ThomasArcane]

Eee, ugly. Look's like shit. :|

It's cause he's bald, Huh?
I also did that R and T shading and it made the under suit look a lot brighter than it was.
It was more of a personal mod I decided to share.