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Ace of Spades - A War Story

Postby Scaream » Sun May 13, 2012 3:51 pm

So I've been playing Ace of Spades since v0.3, I think and I've decided to write a little war story about my adventures. Hope you like it! Hopefully I can post new episodes every day.

Episode 1:The Recruitment

"Hey, get up! Today is recruitment day!". I sighed at the sound of my grandfathers voice, he was always a war addict, but he was too old to enter. I started to get myself washed up and ready to eat breakfast. "Well, here we go" I said. Once I ate breakfast I changed into my grandfathers old uniform from when he was young and the war wasn't going on yet. Then I gave my final goodbyes as I saw the W.R.T.C(War Recruitment and Training Center) truck pulled up on our driveway. "Scaream, make us proud, be a hero, and most of all, return to us.." my grandfather called from the door as I stepped into the truck.

''Alright little girls, all of you shut up'' I was kind of confused because there was nobody who was talking. ''All of you are going to war. And if you'll act like a little girl, YOU'D BE DEAD IN LESS THEN A MINUTE!' My name is Captain Chufler, I will be the leader of your platoon.'' The car suddently stopped, and Captain Chufler got lurched forward. Some other soldiers chuckled. ''You Sissies! We're here!' Now get in line!'' I stepped out into the foggy day and my jaw dropped. ''This building is huge!'' I exclaimed. We all headed towards the door of the building. Once I stepped inside, my jaw dropped yet again. There was atleast a thousand people in here. Suddenly, the PA rumbled ''All New Recruits, please head to Sector 9.'' ''Well you heard it, lets get to Sector 9 girls!''

''Full Name?'' the employee asked at the recruitment desk. ''Scaream Foxif'' I replied. ''Card Number?'' I quickly looked at the card the captain had gave me when we were heading to Sector 9. ''#1095837'' I told her. She gave me a name tag and told me to go to the barracks. ''Private Foxif... Not bad'' I said.
End of Ep.1
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Re: Ace of Spades - A War Story

Postby SICKfudge » Sun May 13, 2012 4:01 pm

No offence or anything and your writing is technicly good but i cant help think the idea is a little old by now, i have lost count of the amount of stories i have seen about aos where it starts with the person signing up, ect.
Still, am interested to see where this one goes.
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Re: Ace of Spades - A War Story

Postby Scaream » Sun May 13, 2012 4:55 pm

Well, A lot of people have crazy adventures that they just have to share :)
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Re: Ace of Spades - A War Story

Postby Conduit » Tue May 15, 2012 2:35 am

Scaream was excited for combat. ' I'm so excited for combat! ' He said. He proudly gripped his rifle, and ran into the battle. Hand on helmet, he ducked behind cover. Looking over at his squad leader, he would smile as the squad leader gave out the instructions and procedures. ' Ready?! ' He would say. '' Ready! '' The squad would repeat. Pumped up with young boy adrenaline, Scaream would chant '' Retreat?! '' ' Hell! ' the squad would say with much enthusiasm as they responded. '' ALRIGHT LETS GO! GO! GO! '' Yelled the squad leader. Scaream would jump from the cover, with his squad and charge into the enemy, spearhead!' BLEED YOU SONS OF B- '' Before Scaream could finish, a motor round would impact dead centre upon his head. His limp body would drop, or...What's left of it. The pool of blood and pulpish organic matter would reflect a scene of the squad being ripped apart by machine gun fire.

And so ends the story of Scaream...An overenthusiastic fellow, who dreamed about becoming the great soldier that he wanted to be. Sadly, this clouded his mind. Like a deep sleep. The motor had awoken him to reality.
And so...
War...War Never Changes.
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