MilkLegend's Application (Denied)

[MilkLegend]

Hey members of the Delta force, my name is Bryan and i'm from NYC. I'm asian but i mainly speak english i was born here in america. The first time i saw Delta was in a TDM where you guys were on the opposing team it was a slaughter for me i was gettign sniped as soon as i showed my face! Niaska is a great player. I also met Big Jim, he is a great player and greets everyone you guys lead the otehr team to victory and showing great teamwork. And at that moment i realized i wanted to be Delta force member. I'm a person who likes medium sized maps i can do OK with all the guns but my favorite one is the SMG. i really am not a fan of camping nor campers. I like to be competitive but also use teamwork and watch out for my teammates.

In game Name: MilkLegend
Future in-game name: [Delta]MilkLegend
Past Clans: None
Most active server: Aloha.pk top ten maps,last man standing, counter strike maps
Most used weapon: SMG
Time zone: EST
Play style: Infiltrate
favorite quote: "Competition is important but teamwork is key to success"
Why do i want to join: i want to join delta because i can work together better with great teammates i will try to lead the team to victory with Delta together.
Communication: Forums,Clan IRC( dont know site name) Skype
I hope you consider accepting me if you don't i guess thats too bad for me and if you do please send me a pm for everthing i need to know thanks




-MilkLegend

[Sparrow137]

No conclusion, grammatical errors, and some punctuation errors. Overrall, okay app.

[NIASKA]

brah as a fellow asian PLEASE for god sakes INTRO AND CONCLUSION

[MilkLegend]

Oh im sorry i read that i couldn't edit this

[NIASKA]

aye vouch hopefully you get in i remember playing you before

[FaZe]

Sorry, denied. You copied a bit too much out of the example application, and I sense some immaturity.