Sniper's Application (Denied)

[sniper95]

Hey DELTA my name is Aiden i live in Melbourne with my aunty and i love ace of spades. I'm not sure whether your supposed to do this or not but...
In-Game Name : Sniper101
Future In-Game Name : [DELTA] Sniper 101 (i hope)
Past clans (if any): none
Most Active Server: aloha.pk infiltration, KLAP – East Coast
Commonly Used Weapon: Rifle, SMG
Time Zone: Australia
Play-style: Hardcore all out
Favorite Quote: "you snooze you lose"
Communication: teamchat?
Did you read the entire recruitment page: yes
Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums: yes
Why you want to join:I want to apply to your clan because all of your clan members that i have met have been really friendly and give you a hand if your new i have learnt a lot of my skills off your clan members and i specialize in sniping, although i can do just as well with the SMG. I love watching you guys play because your tactics are superb and i would like to help make the clan more out there and amazing!

[Sparrow137]

Um..you;
1; Did not get the title right. It's supposed to be <name>'s Application
2; I see 5+ grammar mistakes.
3; No space between name and tag.
4; 56% Sure Australia is NOT a time zone. It is a country.
4a; Commonly used WEAPON. Not WEAPON(s). *I'll let this slide.
5; Missing conclusion?...

[NIASKA]

Normally this is where i give out my mean comments but lets just say there is a page call guild lines policy, I think you should really take some time to get some info on how to join.

[FaZe]

Sorry, denied.