Ross' Application (Denied)

[Ross]

In-Game Name : Ross
Future In-Game Name : [DELTA]Ross
Past clans (if any): None
Most Active Server: AoSLinks.co.nr 1 (Yes it's LinktersHD's server, he is my school friend)
Commonly Used Weapon: Rifle
Time Zone: GMT
Play-style: attackive front line
Favorite Quote: "Headshot!!!"
Communication:
Skype: Ross_Hamer
IRC: #Delta 's channel when needed.
Did you read the entire recruitment page: Yes i did
Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums:
Why you want to join:
Well i'm Ross,
I'm 13 Years old and i have been playing games since i had a computer 2 years ago and my friend told me about Ace of Spades a month ago and i have been playing it ever since.

I would like to join because since i started playing Ace of Spades 0.75 i really have been wondering if i should join a clan. But now i think i should, this is because i now get bored when playing AoS but if i join a clan it will bring a different style of gameplay. What i mean is that i will not be bored because i can particapate in clan matches against other clans which i can't wait to do. Also to make various friends via Skype and the IRC.

It would be nice as well because i know you have a mature clan and it looks very organised. Finally because i would love to use the [DELTA] Clan tag and show off (Not immaturely) how i'm in a good organised clan.

[LinktersHD]

Hope you get in Ross.
Edit: Remember be active on the forums.

[CyanLynx]

You didn't completely follow the format. You're missing an introduction paragraph and a conclusion. You also didn't answer the "Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums" question.

[FaZe]

Denied. You didn't talk about your personality, and there's no introductory paragraph.

[ugotpiez]

I have to go pee.

[Ross]

Sorry the second last paragraph was supposed to be the first and yes i will make an attempt to stay active, both in game and in the forums

[FaZe]

We rarely give second chances. Your grammar/spelling/sentence-structure isn't exactly what we're looking for.